05
Apr
09

Hush.

Your breath
is wasted on
words. Words change nothing…now
Let’s find something else to do with
Your mouth.

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1 Response to “Hush.”


  1. April 7, 2009 at 07:55

    Fantastic. The swelling of the syllable count on each line echoes the tension between the characters. Nice.


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